The Vagaries of Tod and Peter
Edition facts
L. Allen Harker opens her foreword with a small boy who, after ten minutes of patience, advances on a guest and asks, “Is you going to stay very much longer?” That grammatical slip—the child’s “Is you”—is not a mistake but a deliberate choice, one that signals Harker’s ear for authentic speech. Throughout the excerpts, she renders children’s voices with precision: Basil writes “I’m sory it’s not a cleane pak” on a note to his dead grandfather, and a girl on a Suffolk cliff wipes her eyes with a “red-bordered handkerchief” while reading a German chemistry book. These details are not decorative; they are the evidence from which the stories build their emotional weight.
The Weight of a Single Gesture
Harker’s descriptions of physical action carry the narrative burden. In the foreword, a two-year-old “firmly led me to the door and out to the top of the staircase” without a word—the gesture alone conveys his intent. Later, Basil, standing in moonlight before his grandfather’s body, “pushed his little packet underneath the folded hands, kissed them, and turned to go.” The sequence is exact: push, kiss, turn. No interior monologue explains his reasoning; the actions speak. When his mother enters, Basil “stood where he was as though turned to stone.” The simile is plain, but the stillness is absolute. Harker trusts that a child’s body reveals what words cannot.
The Objects That Anchor Emotion
Things matter in these stories. Basil’s gift is a pack of cards—not flowers, not a toy, but a worn deck for whist, because “if there was no whist there grandfather would be dull.” The note is written on a “not cleane pak,” and the imperfection is part of the offering. On the iron seat, the girl’s book is “Mendelejeef Chemie,” a title she cannot pronounce but which becomes the catalyst for a stranger’s curiosity. Harker does not explain why the book makes her cry; she shows the flush, the tremulous mouth, the “proud and happy smile.” The object is a door left ajar, inviting the reader to step through.
The Adult as Observer, Not Interpreter
Harker positions adults as witnesses who often misunderstand. The mother in the deathbed scene asks, “What are you doing, Basil?” and assumes flowers. She does not grasp the logic of the cards. The man on the iron seat is “devoured by curiosity” about the girl’s tears, but he does not intrude; he shifts down the seat, watching. The foreword’s narrator is led to the door by a toddler and fetched back by the mother—the adult is managed, not managing. Harker’s authorial choice is to keep the adult’s perspective limited, so that the child’s inner world remains sovereign, glimpsed but not dissected.
Voice as Signature: Diction and Register
The children’s speech is marked by grammatical invention and formal politeness. Basil’s note uses “sory” and “cleane” in a register that is both childlike and oddly proper. The foreword’s boy asks “Is you going to stay very much longer?” with “honeyed tones”—the adverb signals a calculated sweetness. Harker’s narrator adopts a wry, affectionate tone: the girl “could have passed a searching examination as to his appearance,” and the man’s book “would take a very sharp little girl of ten to make much out of that.” The adult voice is knowing but never condescending, matching the children’s earnestness with a quiet humor that respects their seriousness.
These excerpts suggest that Harker’s stories reward attention to small things: a mispronounced word, a hand on a knee, a packet of cards. The reader is invited to watch children not as puzzles to be solved but as people whose logic is complete within its own terms. The iron seat, the moonlit room, the drawing-room carpet—these are stages for gestures that carry more meaning than any explanation. Approach the collection as a series of such moments, and let the vagaries unfold.